Posts Tagged ‘long-form narrative’

One more from Neil

Keep a fixed point of view. What does your character see, hear, know, think? Ideally, keep your frame to one point of view per section, one point in time. That means lots of time spent with your subjects, to begin to see the world the way they do, and debriefing them after an event or [...]

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The importance of endings

Neil’s take:
You want people to be forgoing sleep to reach the end of your story, to see how the mystery is solved, learn how things turned out, discover the answer to the big question. A great ending has a great payoff embedded in it — even if it’s presented subtly. Go back to the question [...]

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Another tip from Neil

Know your chronology cold. Even if you ultimately decide not to tell your story in chronological order, you’ve got to understand it. Respect the natural sequence. Know who knew what when. Don’t impart your subject with knowledge he/she didn’t have at the point you’re writing about. Understand how events fit into the overall arc.

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Introduce characters with care

Neil:
Introduce them slowly, one at a time, taking time to flesh them out. Look for a telling detail that will make them three-dimensional and memorable. Nicknames are great. There can only be a couple main characters, and one of them should be present in almost all of your scenes. There can be many more secondary [...]

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Frank Sinatra Has a Cold

We’re using Gay Talese’s nonpareil profile as the spine in Neil’s talk on long-form narrative. Not that you ever need a specific reason to re-read but here it is:
Frank Sinatra, holding a glass of bourbon in one hand and a cigarette in the other, stood in a dark corner of the bar between two attractive [...]

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Neil on long-form narrative

Topics are the stuff of Wikipedia entries. Stories pose — and, over the course of the narrative, answer — a central, provocative, compelling question.

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